Decent job!
A bit jerkey animation and sound, but overall fantastic storyline!!!
I expect to see more great stuff from you in the future.
Decent job!
A bit jerkey animation and sound, but overall fantastic storyline!!!
I expect to see more great stuff from you in the future.
Winderfull music.
This flash is different from most of the things on Newgrounds in that it has a very well-developed storyboard, so when you are watching it you're seeing beautiful direction in addition to some great jazz music and nice drawings.
The story was really engaging. The only thing I didn't like about this was that the animation was a little too stiff - for example, when he turns his head you don't animate the in-between frames. Everything else was pretty well done, though.
I wonder, is this an original story or were you inspired by another film?
Awseome
Wow, fantastic story. I must admitt, I am a fan of The Composer, and the style carries through here. Good job on this one, can't wait to see more from you.
5/5
Promising
You have a good idea of direction. Also, I loved the little homages to "Taxi Driver", "Serpico", "Scarface" and was the Dustin Hoffman part "The Graduate", or "Straight Time"? I couldn't tell for sure. Those really are the three greatest actors you know. In this order: Hoffman, DeNiro,Pacino.
Hey, I like it.
Classic musicians tale. Has all the grit that comes with playing life in the shadowy scenes of the world. I also like how the FBI agents' name is Billie Holiday.
Good stuff.