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ok, well the prologue was impossible to read, either make it sorter or slow it down or sumthing. secodnly, i thought the scenes were too radnom, ended abruptly and the one with the droids and clones went on forever.
your animation and technique were good, and given some good direction you could produce some exelent work.
one last thing, t stickfight in the middle looks way to out of place.