It was ok for your first flash
This was an attempt that you did well, i enjoyed the plot, and the whole feel, just make it longer next time.
Reviews for "Homicide"
Well...
Well i guess the flash fit its name. It could have been better.. You should slow down the text a bit. I didnt really have a problem reading it but it did go a bit fast and you couldnt really get the whole affect. You also could have chosen a better song other than (i dont know the actual name of it) "Get psycho". The graphics were well done however and that made up for the speedy text. To sum things up I gave it a 6 for effort. Love to see some more of your work on ng.
ok
It was pretty good but it was pretty short too, and that would be fine if it was meant to be a short but it didnt seem like it was supposed to. Good quality and stuff though, I really liked how the words... did that thing where they appear and dissapear real fast.
I would give it a higher mark but I was REAL dissapointed at how short it was.
if was ok, ive seen alot better
I didnt like the part where they shot at him and he was magically above them, there were alot of things id fix in the story line but good job otherwise
Not bad
Not to bad I liked the animatin but the text was to fast though.......
I could only just about read it... But if you make the tesxt diffrent and add more action and more hand to hand combat.. I'm sure you could make a nice series out of it