Well...
Well i guess the flash fit its name. It could have been better.. You should slow down the text a bit. I didnt really have a problem reading it but it did go a bit fast and you couldnt really get the whole affect. You also could have chosen a better song other than (i dont know the actual name of it) "Get psycho". The graphics were well done however and that made up for the speedy text. To sum things up I gave it a 6 for effort. Love to see some more of your work on ng.
It was ok for your first flash
This was an attempt that you did well, i enjoyed the plot, and the whole feel, just make it longer next time.
Hmm
It's evident you tried so I'll try and be constructive on why I'm not giving that impressive a score (3). The way you did the words, while new and interesting, was also very annoying to read. I ended up reading it too fast so I'd be reading what was previously said and everything, I think normal subtitles would be much better. But wait, what would be a million times better than that would be voice acting, even if it's just you putting on a bunch of voices it's infinately better than having to read stuff. I liked your plot, you had a whole plot there but it really did play out far too fast and actually relied on reading your little comments - it would be better if the flash could put the story together itself, with a bit more introduction maybe. You might like to do one in a semi 'wide screen' kind of feel rather than a tiny box too, like have the width 550 and the height 300, or something - when people do that it just seems to bring a touch of class for me. I get touched by the class. Other than that, be prepared to never get too far with sticks on Newgrounds, they've very much had their day, that said i still quite enjoy a well made stick movie. Best of luck with your future flashes.
pretty good
it was reall good i liked where you went with the idea of the caption but for me atleast it went way to fast... but it was great... too short though but eh... its good GJ!!! wana see your next work
ok
It was pretty good but it was pretty short too, and that would be fine if it was meant to be a short but it didnt seem like it was supposed to. Good quality and stuff though, I really liked how the words... did that thing where they appear and dissapear real fast.
I would give it a higher mark but I was REAL dissapointed at how short it was.