Better than I thought
I was ready to blam this when I saw the first few frames. Turned out to be pretty funny. Good job.
Reviews for "The Humper"
ContractedObsession responds:
Thanks I really appreciate it. I'll be making a whole series of this guy and how he can't control himself. It's really horrible how people judge it from the cover like that. Thank you for watching it all the way through and then making your vote.
It gave me a good chuckle
This was a pretty amateur flash with the sticks and all, but looking beyond that this is creative and funny. ^_^
First of all when the wife walks in and announces shes off to the market I think if you made the subtitles blend in with the background would be much better then just a white background, or even a word bubble would look cool.
I just think you could make that part look much better.
For drawing the furniture yourself it was pretty damn good, like I know if I even attempted to draw a couch on a computer it would end up looking more like a box with a few sketchy lines inside.
So cotous to you in that department.
The actaul stick characters themselves were above average for sticks, the walking animations the wife made when she walked in and then out were both smooth and realistic.
As for the "humper" I thought it looked silly as with every 'hump' he made he shifted forward and just that added to the humour. =)
Different camera angles would be beneficial for you, like just adding a few clips of a birds eye view or even a close up of his crotch I think would be funny and might just improve your score a little, yanno?
Overall this is a funny flash about a guy who gets a little too carried away while listening to music but with poor drawings. Good first flash just keep improving and I'll be sure to keep reviewing. 3/5.
The sticks weren't the problem at all....
Stick figures are cool.. I just didn't see much of a point.. But I still liked it.. I agree with the fact that there should be some sort of word bubble around the speech... Also, you should change the angles and what not... Mix it up.... Bring in a cat... That'd be hilarious.. Good job!
Cute
Hi there, very humorous. i liked it very much, for a stick movie, this was the best i've ever seen, good work. but after all, it was better if you really have drawn something more detailed for us to enjoy.
lol
lol .. I love the song and the concept. I laughed damn hard when I saw this. Nice job.
Keep on humpin little man