hmmm
the only thing i can say is lower the volume on the first instrument
Reviews for "Death To be True"
Heitoki responds:
I did, but when i exported, it kept coming out loud... so i said,"The hell with it". And uploaded it here. Thank you for the review.
PS- I love your songs ^^
I like the style here!
All the sounds are quite pretty, though they are be a bit repetetetive... The opening sound really is too loud for such a sharp sounding clip though.... But I like it ^.^! The beat is pretty decent too ^.^! Keep making more of this ^.^!
Heitoki responds:
Im sry about that first instrument >.> i do appreciate the review ^^
Needs work
Names Zen. The one thing that really needs help with this piece of music is that you need to clarify the insturments way more. And as with BOUNC3's review please try your hardest to lower the volume on the first instrument. I may not make flash or music but I have a taste for both. I'll review your music and tell what's needed. Do your best!
Heitoki responds:
I try, but this was the first peiece I made that actually sounded like music (sorta). I know i soulda killed the volume allittle, but as mentioned before, when i exported, it wouldnt keep its current volume setting.
Thx for reviewing, and i will do better.
Needs solid structure
Needs some solid structural changes. Build ups and breakdowns would be nice :) ...
Also that first instrument is loud and the kick is a bit quiet.
Not a bad track. Some mixing needs to be done though
I'll be blunt...
I -hate- trance. This song is alright, most especially for a newbie artist. Personally I'd work on variation, length and more instruments.
But as for Lord-Steel's review... what a fool. Nobody just becomes a great music artist straight away, and that goes for everything.
Ok, so there is a lot to work on, but "Lord-Steel" is just one heck of a moron. I presume you upload your songs to NG for opinions and constructive criticism, just like I do, since it helps you know exactly what you're improving. Lord-Steel's review is FAR FROM constructive criticism; it's just a load of rubbish. You should always ignore people like that!
Heitoki responds:
Thank you for actually realizing what these songs are here for. I want to get better, i just need time. Anyways.. thanks for your review. I hope to here from you again in the future ^^