Nice try
It was pretty good but it could have been a lot better with better graphics. Yours were kinda sloppy, no offense. I like the storyline, its kinda cheesy but still better then 95% of NG stuff. I voted 5 because I wanted this to get protected. I sorta like it.
Keep working, I'm sure you'll stuff will get good!
Not bad...
I like the story and all...But the animation and sound need some work. Other than that, nice job.
cool
not bad, the story is good but the art isnt too great. good for a start tho.
not bad
the animation was pretty second-rate, but you seem to have put some effort into the story, and give you some props for making this long enough to be watchable. i actually kind of liked it. work on your style a little, you'll have some even better stuff.