Shows a lot of promise!
Good preview, but submit it to NG alphas next time. You could change your stick figures to make it more realistic, and the graphics lag too much.
Reviews for "War Stories: Preview"
ParadoXTime responds:
Yeah the lag is from the rain... i would have tooken it off but i liked it so i just left it
-Justin :)
thanks next time ill try to mess with rain so it dont lag as much and ill fix sticks too :)
good but you need a history review
that was good and im sure it will end up to be really well done, but why are all the M1 garand bolt action and why the hell is there an M1 Abrum tank in the back round, (im not sure is the WW2 or the Gulf war cause they were about 50 years apart)
but keep it up , I thought it was cool
ParadoXTime responds:
Umm good point i dont know...
I guess I just added the tank to make it look cool ahaha
-Justin :)
Looks great
Can't wait to see the finished product. And I like the idea of stick figures at war. Keep up the good work.
ParadoXTime responds:
Ahaha thanks!
The other reviewers all mean like STICKS SUCK! ahaha
-Justin
see you like the idea I hope you like it as bad as the 1st episode!
also visit flash cheat by looking in my profile and click the site :)
Stick it to me!
HAHAHaha! Can't wait to see the finished piece. A friend of mine writes a comic that he does solely in stick figures so i love the idea of seeing them in a flash movie!
ParadoXTime responds:
Ohh stick it to ya eh? ;)
ahaha ok well thanks for reviewing and voting!
-Justin :)
Good but could be better
It looks pretty good although, the rifle sounds were a bit flat, working on that would help alot.
I also agree on trying to make the sticks look a little more human, you dont have to go the whole hog, but it would make the visuals so much better when injuries accur.
looking forward to seeing what you've done with it...
ParadoXTime responds:
Yeah I know what you mean...
The sticks i made because since I work at all "stick" place then we have to do stick animations even though I do human better
-Justin :)