needs work
Problems...
1. Kick is too soft, needs to be uncompressed. It's also very quiet.
2. Melody is largely repetitive with very little song structure.
3. Volume levels in the intro are way off, that plucking noise needs to be compressed.
4. The pad in the back adds dynamics to the song but needs to be cranked up.
5. The kick sounds mono and needs to be stereo-ized.
6. Melody is good, but the bassline notes need to be re-thought.
Spend more time on this and use your ears when you're mixing, figure out something that's going to sound better than what you have already.