I can see the hard work
You had a lot of passion for this. You can tell.
I saw all the hard work you put into it and attention to detail.
I think the slide show at the beginning was particularly good.
If you do it right, you can get away with simple graphics, I wish more ng artists could see this and not beg for a 5 after putting a few squares that dance on the screen for 2 minutes.
The prelogue needed some subtitles, maybe dialogue, because it wasn't completly clear what was going on. Dont have to put alot. Just enough to clarify what's going on. Although you did a really good job with the pictures.
I think the problem was you got bogged down in too many details and the project was taking way too long to complete.
The way you were going it would end up being a 30 minute movie easily.
When you write the script and story board the movie out, you want to trim it out, cut down the details. Like at the beginning of the animation part, it wasnt necesary to see them get out of bed and then walk to the door and then sit down. I would have just shown them in bed then a voice saying time for breakfast, then cut to the kitchen where she is cooking and they come into eat.
Actually you probably didnt need the breakfast scene. You could have gone straight to him running in the woods practicing his arrows, and then what ever trouble was coming his way , show a scene of that.
That way you wont get lost in all the detail.
It jsut takes practice.
The art still needs a lot of polish, but I can see the care you put into it.
You need to study how things look, so they dont look "deformed". Get some art books and sketch, sketch, sketch.
Quality comes from quanity. Your not trying for a "master piece" each time. Just practice. LIke you would your letters when learning to write.
But I love all the small details you put in there. Bubbling pot, the swans.
Ect.
Keep it up, I think one day you will be a serious animator, or illustator at least.
You have a nack for it.
I would keep making this movie. Be great practice for you.
Practice your drawing and get help with the technical details. The sound cut in and out on the animation part for the voices. You need to do all voices or all subtitles. I dont know if you tried to do all voices and the file got bugged or what but cant do some and then not others.
4/5 for the effort. I really liked it.
I hope you do more.
If you want help on the script, let me know. I'll be glad to help a budding Disney. ^_^