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Feel sorry for you...unfinished and aborted, so very sad.
Reviews for "Syphen Stories"
05432 responds:
I am sad too. : (
Oh well. I got to show it to people anyways.
Am I just dense?
Maybe I'm not getting it, but I didn't see a story here, much less a bunch of "Stories" about "Syphen", whatever that is.
The pictures are nice, though more than a little derivative of Akira Toriyama's work. The music was also good, though the transfer didn't sound very well in places.
The big problem though, is that there's no story. There are a lot of great pictures, but there's no way to tell what's going on. Animation or dialogue or even subtitles could've helped establish some sort of thread. Maybe someone else is picking up on a story or thread, but me, I'm just lost.
05432 responds:
I did not get ther story to developed at the time. Later on it did though. Oh well. And yes, in my earlier days, DBZ was all i could draw. At the time i was "starting" to stray away from DBZ, but not completely. I have my own style now though.
interesting
Very interesting style. Did you mean to have the images appear pixally as the "camera" zoomed in on them? Nice project overall.
05432 responds:
Well, they are pictures drawn and then scanned. I had to lower thier quality due to filesize issues. I did not "mean" to make them pixilated, but i knew that it was there.
i like the idea
this definately needs some work. I like your characters, but I think that you should make the voice acting through out the flash. It's weird that it's spotty. I don't know if this is possible. But you should really make it move faster. I mean I lost interest in the story after he drank the bowl of soup, but I know that you have great potential. You really gotta quicken the pace. I like the idea of having the drawings in the begining. That rocked. Just fix those few things and you're in business. Good Luck with future animations :)
05432 responds:
Thanks for liking it. Yah, the story was a little slow. But at the time i was really hoping for the fighting to make up for it.....but.....yah. No fighting.
Very Good
Methodic, well done drawn out, plot laced, flash. Some kinks in the animation and sound continuity. I was going to give you a 9 but it is uncomplete and ended abruptly. Keep working on your drawing and animation, you have got some potential. Show me what you can do!
05432 responds:
23450. That is my real acount. Watch some of them if you want to know what i can do nowa days.