And that's being nice.
I know this is kinda what you're going for is the cute, nieve, don't know a thing about animation, which is original and good, but this is the only one I've had a problem with.
And here's the killer. It was the racist comments you made about the "Chocolate man" Again this was probably harmless fun, but I for one found that quite racist, along with the way you seemed to stereotype black people.
Anyway, that's all I had the problem with in that one, keep it up man.