Not a very Good Flash
Graphics - Completely traced off the Comic "VG Cats".
Style - The style was not your own.
Sound - No sound.
Violence - Nope. It was just talking without voices.
Interactivity - N/A
Humor - Very, very old Final Fantasy Humor.
Overall - Creating a Flash version of the Comic you saw without making it any better is an extreme setback. It was just a moving slideshow of the orginial comic and you know it.
Advice - If you are having trouble making original Flashes, think of something you like. I like to work with the Undead theme, therefore all my Flashes will deal with the Undead. Try harder. :)