Another case
Another case of excellent flash being combined with mediocre storylines. The animation was extraordinary, but the story left me feeling indifferent.
Reviews for "Sprawl Metropolis (Old)"
Quite lame
The dialogue, in particular, was horrible.
"I've got me a demon to slay!"
"I'm just a lonely traveler!"
I've heard better writing from anime hacks, or Helen Keller.
Next time read some short stories or something.
cool
that was a good flash man make some more
Pretty nice...
I enjoyed this comic, the style and Graphics styles are great, nicely done, the only beef I have with this one is the scripting...Needless to say....you could have...found better ways to say things in the story...sounded almost cheesy...The part with the tunnel....for instance...
"I will get through this tunnel, even if it kills me"
Think about it, just find a better way of saying things and think 'em out a bit better...Other than that...
W00t this Mutha.
OMIFUCKINGOD
This SO fucking rocked!!! If you're a viewer, watch this! If you're the person who made it, keep up the good work!