hmmm
It was a good start...slow sprite flash and during the fight with vegeta it just stops...you should try and fix that...other than that good start
Reviews for "DBZ The Last Resort 1"
Steevoo responds:
It is fixed ;)
Boring...
But you did stick true to DBZ that instead of fighting they talk too d@mn much! Sprites isn't a good way to show off DBZ, looks like you ripped most of it off from a Gameboy game. Try harder next time, spell check everything before you put it up too, there were many grammatical errors. It was okay, but there was just too much talking, it needs to be cut down a lot, and you need some kind of graphic skill to show how their martial art skills look instead of the same repetition over and over again. Better luck next time.
Steevoo responds:
Yeah well I just did it in a rush too... I'll do better next time ;)
Meh...
Personaly, I hate sprite movies... But that was pretty good for a first. Better then some others I've seen... I suggest that you edit the "speelling". I would guess that either you're quite young, English is you secong language or you just type fast and are too lazy to edit... Whatever the case, I suggest you do something about it. I also suggest that you kind of end it... The fight starts and it freezes... Was there more? Another thing, it was a little slow... Other then that it was good! Good on you! Looking forwards to more work...
Steevoo responds:
Hey thanks I'll try to make next ones a lot better ^^ And yeah english is my secondary language I learn it at school and on TV (TV rocks xD) I'll try to fix speplling then xD
Eh.
The premise/plot was good, but your grammar, scripting, and animation suck.
Needs work.
I'm hoping English is your second language because you sure did have a lot of spelling and grammar errors in it. So yeah, if you aren't to great at grammar and spelling and all that, have someone that is good at it look it over before you submit your other flashes. Next time, try to fix the music so the songs aren't all playing at once, you had all three of those songs playing at once! Other than that, you did a pretty good job at animating the sprites!
Steevoo responds:
Yeah I know about my english problem and yes it's secondary language. yeah I'll fix the music too this flash was made in a hurry anyway ^^