Its okay
needs alot of work on the quality of the graphics but besides that story is okay and sound is alright as well
Reviews for "The Transformers PreEarth"
Nice first try
This is pretty good for a first flash. Though you might want to speak louder for Jazzes voice next time.
Good
I'm a big fan of the origenal Transformers tv show.
The good parts to this are that the lazers sownd just right. Because they're the real ones from the show, right?
The story line is corect to, all the things that happened in this movie are what is discribed on the fan web-site.
The parts to improve on are that the voices should sownd more like the real voices, and try to draw better.
Otherwise it looks like crap.
But you did good on this one.
Hmmm...
The graphics are not good at all, but it's still good t see someone who draws by hand.
the sound is not very good either as there's no volume leveling.
Stll, I'll give you an overall score of 5 as it's a good idea and because you've got the background just right=)
3/5 and keep up the good work mate =)
Good, but not great.
The graphics in this leave much to be desired. I would suggest using shapes instead of doing it freehand. I would also suggest having a picture of the transformers in front of you when you draw. But They were barely recognizable. Also, you need to practice the voice acting for this. It was far off par. Try getting a real microphone and doing it 2 or 3 feet away so you can do Starscream's voice without making it too loud. He tends to yell. lol But you can tell you were using a headset or a computer mic and you were right up to the mic. On the good side, the storyline was a strong one. If you wrote that yourself, it was very well done.