yea
It was ok. I wasn't really a fan of the quick fade out's here and there. It needs a good melody, not just spastic drums. It seems like you just have drums, and then some random tunes here and there. You should play with sterio shaper, particularly on your drums, they seem a bit mono.
I particularly didnt didnt like the snare and the hats. The snare didnt have enough ka to it, and the hat seemed like a tamborine
I liked what the drums actually played, but I didn't really like there sound. You should also experiment with having multiple drum sounds, esspecially if your songs are going to be mainly drum bassed.
also good to see you actually put this in dnb and not ambient. lol
well peace out, hope you improve. Untill next time my friend.