wow
wow that was... weird part of me liked it part of me hated it and part of me laughed my ass off o_O all in all it was pretty good one reccomendation tho, dont make the bubbles go to fast cuz shinos were big bubbles and they went away to fast so i couldnt read them >.< 9/10 for the exact way that you made it like saying the way you made it how you made it but i think you could have done better in the general idea so 7 1\2/10 :D