Wow..
I really liked it. It definitely had a "children's book" feel to it. Just a bit of revision, as you said, including perhaps a slight upgrade in some of the graphics / animation (esp. the green dragon, I'm thinking).. and it will be perfect. Great job! Very original.
Yeah now that now that I really think of it I should spiff him up a bit. I guess the roughness is from the really only one night right before the deadline where I did most of it! So come check back in around march and it should be better! Thanks!
To fix the sound...
on the frame that you start from when you replay, for sounds, select that music clip and choose stop. The frame after that select that same sound and choose start. That will guaruntee the sounds will not overlap. Hope it works. Good luck
I'll be sure to do that! Thanks for the tip!!
It's very cute in my opinion.
I think you did well. Personally I think it's lovely. The way you did some of the graphics was good, but then again, could use a little work. I'm sure children would really enjoy your story very much as well as your pictures still though.
Why thank you!! That's what I was hoping for! :-)
haha
calling you a loser would be putting it lightly, but yeah, good job.
hmmm.... now that I look you haven't submited anything so you can't call me a loser just for making it not be all violence based. But that's your choice! Everyone else... Hope you enjoyed this sub!!
it was good
this is a very fine flash animation. on the other side there are some things about this submission that i would like to bring to your attention. first there needs to be a little more motion its almost more of a video/game right now. the only other problem i had with this was that the part decribing the dragons sounded like dr. suses red fish blue fish book. but those things aside it was a very nice flash. good job
lol It did?!? I havn't read that book! I guess I will have to do something about that but who knows!