Nice style
I like the way you made the story book, you just need to sharpen the transitions and the sounds. You had a wierd fuzzy noise goin the whole time and i could have done w/ out that, keep up the good work tho!
Nice style
I like the way you made the story book, you just need to sharpen the transitions and the sounds. You had a wierd fuzzy noise goin the whole time and i could have done w/ out that, keep up the good work tho!
Fuzzy noise?? I'll have to look for that and see what I can do! Thanks for your review!
needs some work
the graphics are just fine. but you need to fix some of the animation and the interactive stuff. keep up the good work.
by the way: newgrounds may not be the right place to put anything without blood and gore. I'm sure you'll do just fine though.
Well thats going to be fixed around March 22! Also, I guess NG is going to have to rein in the blood lust for this one! lol No offence to anyone if they didn't think that was a joke!! Anyways, thanks for taking the time time to watch and review my work!!!
haha
calling you a loser would be putting it lightly, but yeah, good job.
hmmm.... now that I look you haven't submited anything so you can't call me a loser just for making it not be all violence based. But that's your choice! Everyone else... Hope you enjoyed this sub!!
Wow..
I really liked it. It definitely had a "children's book" feel to it. Just a bit of revision, as you said, including perhaps a slight upgrade in some of the graphics / animation (esp. the green dragon, I'm thinking).. and it will be perfect. Great job! Very original.
Yeah now that now that I really think of it I should spiff him up a bit. I guess the roughness is from the really only one night right before the deadline where I did most of it! So come check back in around march and it should be better! Thanks!