I liked it
but you had a few things wrong I don't know if it was just a spelling error, but the style of gun with clip behind the action is called a "bullpup" not "bullup". there was a few spelling errors too, but I'm just being a dick :D
nice job
Reviews for "Gun Tutorial"
scrimpy responds:
O, thank you. I'm German and so I have a few problems with English. To the Bullpup thing, I'm not going to fix that but I'll add it in Gun Tutorial 2-
Great...
My word...I haven't heard that song for absoloutely ages...so thanks for that lol!
Anyways, I didn't really do it as I went along cos I know how to do guns anyway, but after i clicked your bbs sig i though i might as check it out and i goota be honest it's pretty frickin good. this should help a lot of people and you've got everything right down to the arrows to go back or advance, so good job on that. overall it was presented well, and someone who actually has the balls to ASK for a 5 more than certainly deserves it. It got my 5.
Take it easy,
~Chaz
scrimpy responds:
Thank you!
PS - I had a big problem with the 'back'-arrow, because the music was starting another time and then you had to press the mute-button. But you can see, the problem is solved, now.
Great tutorial.
You went above and beyond on this paying attention to even the smallest details, you even taught me a few things I never knew "pumps" shot multiple bullets.
I liked the soundtrack you picked and to make it even better you gave us the option to tweak the volume or mute it.
I appreciate you using a black background and white text because always with a bright background after alot of reading it hurts the eyes and nobody wants that.
The forward AND back buttons are a really good feature, allows the viewers to take as much time as they need and go back if they missed something.
Anyway best of luck to you and hopefully you continue to submit flash to NG. Great job.
scrimpy responds:
Thank you.
I'm working on Gun Tutorial 2
I need the reviews to make it better than this one
=D
I don't draw or make flash, but that was very well put together. If I DID draw and/or make flash, I feel I would have gotten alot out of that. It's good to see someone that puts thought and planning into their work.
scrimpy responds:
Thank you!
There is also information, you don't need for flash (How guns work). Gun Tutorial 2 is coming soon. There will be more information and the history about guns! =D
Kewl
I liked this because i love drawing guns.it helped me a little bit improoving my gun drawing skill!nice guns by the way! :D
scrimpy responds:
Thank you