Needs work
Lots of work like not blinking from one background to another that hurts the eyes make like a transition into it or somthing and the intro wasnt too bad but there was a big empty space in the upper left corner and small pics flashing of the 3D sonic werent to bad but again with the transitions.
please make sure you keep these tips in mind of these things if your going to make a part 2 or somthing.
Lol u guys need to read the author's notes better. This isn't even part one yet! I just posted the intro so i could get some constructive critizism from you folks before I get started on the real movie. :)
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But anyways, it was pretty good. I think that the only thing you need to do is make him run for a little less time. It gets kind of either repetive, or stupid watching Sonic run like that. Not only that, but I'm not a Sonic fan so watching him run over and over and over was just boring. I think that you should've also worked on your timing. Btw, what was that music called? Even though it was just a practice intro, you still should've put credits.
Naughty, naughty.
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Shutup Andy.
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ok, almost everyone has herd of gizoid if they were living under a rock. but that was still ok. if that was your first prevew that was ok for a beginner. besides im a beginner at flash myself... I cant find any good backgrounds that I like unless i hack a game or something like that. but you need to learn some actionscript so you can make a movie. ive been doing some art projects for a few months so I can get my series on the go fast. but you need to give me those links. and your flash, like i said, is ok. I think i would do a little bit worse.
*NOTE* I have never hacked in my life so dont ask me how.
The links, eh Ego? Well, I can't say I know exactly where I got them, on account that it's been quite some time since then. I pretty much used a bunch of background kits off the mysical forest zone. However, they seem to update a lot so you my have to Google some earlier versions of the site to get to them.
*NOTE* I know exactly how to hack things offline. I just don't.
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dude that wuz cool in all but you should put some fighting scenes on it. like
sonic v.s. shadow
ok.
for my review to the first one:yes,i have Sonic adventure 2 battle and i have all endings.the dark ending is just made up.the true and hero endings go with the storyline,the dark one doesn't.
P.S.y'know the review i done for the first one?I SAID NON CANON 'CAUSE THE DARK ENDING IS MADE UP AND SONIC USED CHAOS CONTROL IN IT!!!!!P.P.S.hate the music