Great!
That was amazing. I need to see more of these. Please make more.
Reviews for "With A Smile"
well
I simply HAVE to give you a 10 for your excellent graphic skills and good sense of music.
I didn't get the story, though. She's a psychotic assasin, I'm guessing...
have you made any other flashes where it shows HOW she kills?
Alamus responds:
Yeah, the story is kinda vague. But here it is.
The guy doing all the walking is Anthony Ryn, a being not of this world who is being pursued by a race known as the Krellion (which he is half of.) Anthony is not alone, however, for others of his race are hiding in clusters all around Earth. The "psychotic assasin" is one of them.
She is Naomi Axen, the latest decendant of the Axen clan. Her duty (since their whole race was destroyed in fullout war) is to protect the remaining Draconian (that's what Axen is) from the Krellion who wish to put them into breeding programs.
So basically, a Krellion was following Anthony on the roof tops, but was killed cause Axen got to him first. The Krellion was killed by Axen, hence the whole "And dropped him...with a smile."
Ta-DA! STORY! PLOT! CONFUSING AS ALL HELL I KNOW! >D
Wow 8-O
Outstanding piece of work! More, please
creepy
similar to Lilium.....
Sardonic
I could picture Naomi's sardonic smile as she throws that poor slob over the edge. Another great job of wanting me to see more and more of Kin.