Mediocre, mon ami.
It was pretty funny, but it was amazingly slow-paced, and I was starting to hope that it would end faster. The graphics and style were nice, but you should really work on the voiceover delays in future episodes. I understand that the characters are supposed to be, well, DEAD, and all, but it's really boring as is. Besides, making them talk like normal people might actually add to the humor factor.
Yeah, I have pretty much been getting the exact same response from everyone else around, taken on board.
This is my first storyline-driven cartoon, and I hope to perfect it a little more come Episode 2.
Thanks. ;)
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kinda reminded me of salad fingers... but made a little more sense
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you should of have them fighting.remember the comment about killing yourself that comes in big time!!
Hardy-har-har. If you'dve paid any attention to the cartoon, you would have realised that they couldn't have been fighting.
I've still yet to see a better submission from you.
hmm
Ok, i really liked the character design. There is a lot of potential.. the lip sync didnt work out quite correctly, but im sure you get better at that...
But its really pretty boring and slow... along with a pretty cheap punch line...
If you work out a better story and speed it up you could make pretty awesome movies
Thanks champ, all points taken on board. I was experimenting with the slow style, seeing how it come across but I think I overused it a bit. As for the lipsyncing, I'm still working on that.
Thanks!
Predictable
It was OK, but the end was predictable and gay... it totally ruined the whole animation for me.