Dazzling!
This was amazing! Submissions like this are few and far between. It looks like you have some real talent. If you can tweak the voice a little this would be a virtually flawless flash. The voices were just a little too loud. I do not know too much about it so I can't tell you how to fix it, but it is the only thing I noticed that needed work. I think Joe has series potential. Thik you might do that? Great work, keep it up!
Charming story
It was a fun story with good animation. I really liked it, even gave it a 5. However...
1) The sound quality was awful. Heavily distorted.
2) It's been mentioned before, but Joe's bed is missing in some scenes and there's a simpson's character there instead.
---Finally!---
A nice, sweet, happy submission! More importantly, there's no gory twist ending where someone's head explodes or they bleed to death! And, even though it is artistically beautiful, it's not depressing beyond belief. Not your typical submission on NG.... and that's a good thing! The sound was a bit too loud and there was some static. But, that doesn't change the fact that this is one of the more enjoyable shorts on NG! Well done!
Fabulous
But there was a little bug when i played it... in the scene where Joe is in his bed the bed dissapears and a simpson character with a beer in his hand appears...
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Simply genius.