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Reviews for "KAZAHANA: The Formula"

umm...

that kinda....sucked...

Can see a sequal coming

It was quite good a bit hard to get an understanding of the back drop by the it proved to have good animations. I look forward to seeing a sequal.

Pretty interesting

Okay, I am a weapons buff by nature, and so that guy at the end holding his gun sideways would affect his aim to the point of him emtying the damn thing and hitting nothing but wall and other scenery (please ignore that, like I said, weapons buff).
Nicely done, I figure that more will be revealed later on. Am looking forward to it.

Hmmm...

Well...the story is interesting I guess. But you need to keep this story flowing and QUICKLY, at least until we get a general idea of where this sotry is going. Why does the old man want to make himself invisible? Who the hell is the china geezer from the beginning and why don't we see him for the rest of the story? What inheritance are they talking about? Who are the Kazahana and why do they seem so important anyways?
And why make such a seemingly WORTHLESS keypad or whatever it is? Who the hell is the dude at the end of this part, the one who shots the lady in the hand? What's HIS part in all of this?
Now I know you're thinking "suspense keeps the viewers hooked" but this isn't suspense. It's "wtf-just-happened" stuff and you just wonder why the hell all that shit just happen, and decide there are too many unanswered questions to bother being hooked on seeing the rest. Those few who WILL want to see WHY all these things happen will be utterly and completely PUT DOWN if you take too long to FOLLOW THROUGH, and you will lose whatever little audience you had.

6 on Graphics because I'm sorry, but I've seen better. Still, you tried to animate in manga, no alot of people are brave (or dumb) enough to try and animate in japanese style.
8 on style well, for reason stated above. You're either incredibly brave or incredibly stupid and/or conceited.
10 on sound, voice acting was damn good and the music was near spot-on.
6 for violence, I find guns and all are getting old. The "ask my gun" thing made me smirk though. Save.
0 for interactivity. No need to explain there.
0 for humour. There was none.

So overall, you get a 7. It'll only be a 7 if you follow through PROPERLY. If you don't well, you'll go down in flames.

Pretty good

Needs a bit of work, like your bullets dont move nearly fast enough, and u need to make it a bit longer. If you dont, this storyline is not going anywhere fast.