Nice name :P
that was funny :D and when i saw the name i just had to see it (look at my name :P) when will the updated version be out?
Reviews for "slackers episode0:the bum"
I certainly hope he wasn't as nuts
The story and graphics were done way better than most first submissions, but you seriously need to animate some more. There was hardly any movement and also hardly anything happened. Just some wacko saying crazy stuff. It was funny, but it could've been done better. Also, why was the intro so different from the actual flash?
exocel responds:
im thinking about making the intro a continuos thing between every flash i make, kinda like a trademark of my own cartoons.
Great first attempt
Instead of making still symbols and tweening them across the screen, try using a few more layers and make up the character models using those layers and making a walk animation (If that made ANY sense at all... hardly makes sense to me). I would probably recommend improving the intro. The sounds were a bit lacking and a bit too far apart. The intro doesn't have to be long but you got a good idea for yours. Just make it a bit shorter.
For a first submission, it's great. I know from experience it takes ages to make your first Flash so I can appreciate how the art is somewhat lacking.
What won me over was the Magic Roundabout theme when the bum kinda "introduced" himself.
Great work. Make more. I'll be interested to see how well you come along.
exocel responds:
i didnt say it in the cartoon but only the bum can hear the music, the other guy (watch this space youl'l see him again) just saw a nutjob wearing one sandal shaking his head.lol.
Very good
pretty aweaome stuff but get a mic and do the voice youself itll be so much better! keep it up
not to bad
Looks like Terrance or Phillip from South park. Found that pretty funny. But sounds like you have Steven Hawkings doing the bum. I can be wrong LMAO. Pretty good and worthy of a sequal. Plus show some movement on the othe characters too if you are going to do that. Cant wait to see what you are going to come up next.