sux so bad
that was totally weird this needs some serious work and what was the point of it anyway
sux so bad
that was totally weird this needs some serious work and what was the point of it anyway
sux
interesting story XD but why was he looking at smut and stuff next to his kid and the mouse pad etc
wasn't bad
wasn't bad, was nothing special... i give 6.
Needs work
It needs work mostly in the plot
well...
i will give u one on the house, just to be nice, but pleeeese put some effort into it man.