It is wonderfull...
but you really should have finished the whole thing before putting it on here in my opinion, especially since it is so short. I watched the unfinished full version on your website and I recommend that everyone else do the same - it gives you a much better idea of where this is heading (although I'm still very confused about what you plan to do with this, to be honest - is this the introduction for a tv series?).
One thing, though - how come the file size is so enormous? Are you sure that you can't do something to make it smaller? I mean, I've seen animations of similar quality on Newgrounds that don't have huge file sizes ("Sweet Mother of Vartan" for instance, which has a slightly bigger file size but is also a lot longer). Really, there must be ways to make the file size smaller somehow...