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This is really nice graphics but I'm thinking you will need to speed it up alot. Even if it doesn't seem to have much length people will appreciate it more if its not like we're waiting for the character to make it across the screen. If you're going to do the whole thing like this 'side on' view i'm thinking you should do many layers of action. eg. small zombies or whatever walking silently in the shadows. It would just give it some depth... looking forward to the final :)