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Reviews for "The Stick Memory: Short"

Interesting.

If those choppers and guns were drawn by you, good job.
I only didn't like the fact that there was no story, as well as some repetitive animation. It was also short, but if you can bring out a full story for this idea, I'd like to see it.
I gave a lower sound because that helicopter noise got annoying FAST.
The fast-paced sequences were really good though, and overall this flash piece looks promising--keep it up!

Hit and miss

Some parts of it looked really nice, the us army guy, the helicopters, they looked pretty sweet. The city seemed very lazy, since when is a city a line of towers. You could have spent more time working on that, since you have showed how good some stuff can look when you do try.
Also think the animation of the guy when you press play needs a bit of work, but the rest seemed fine.

yeah

i liked it when it had the gun shooting but it was weird after that. yeah toughluck is hard to compare to but you did a good job! oh yeah dont listen to somoke-tower hes a homo.

Jesto responds:

thanks, im thinking of improving it, and removing unessesary crap. ill try to add to it. thanks for being supportive

Nice

I think this is a stepping stone to something great! The graphics were great, just the story line needs a little help, but you have something here dude, you have something, i hope to see more from you!

Jesto responds:

thanks buddy, it's just that im planning on a bigger, much better animation, and i just wanted to show new grounds some of my skills, that's all.

I say...

it would be better if you sticked to that war part on this movie istead of trying to make it all have a story and what not.... it probably would have gotten a better grade because most NG people like Violence :)

well then... if you make another one with just a big war part then i trust you it will get atleast a really high 2 or a good 3
-Justin :D