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Reviews for "sheepfleece"

WOW you, sir, have talent.

You just released those proffessor wigglepecker cartoons like a few days ago too, so unless this was already done, you are the fastest worker I have ever seen. But unfortunatly, as people in the reviews before me pointed out, its just not funny enough. My suggestion is to get a bunch of your friends together in a room, show them the characters for the next toon, give them a general idea of whats going to happen and have them come up with ideas. Also, instead of having an idea for the episode such as "the characters sit down for lunch and talk about the one characters drawings" have an idea with more excitement, like "The characters sit down for lunch but realize they have no money to pay for the meal" or "the characters sit down for lunch, only to see their boss whom they hate sitting accross from them, and try to reak revenge". Also I would say don't worry about keeping the cartoons so clean, I mean would you rather be making a family guy cartoon, or a Cailou cartoon? Chances are you probably want something in the middle, and right now your leaning toward Cailou

zipahead responds:

Nah Ive been working on all these cartoons for over two years and it's only now that I uploaded them...I guess my stuff is pretty clean.. but It's not cailou... believe me that market would not go for this...for them it's way to adult.. but thanks for your comments

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I compleatly agree with the last comment. Think this through next time. Most of those jokes have been done a million times in your average bugs bunny cartoon and stuff. The human thing made me smile but nothin in it made me laugh. As for the animation it is quite stunning. Just add something funny to this and a bit of a better story and you'll have somethin. BTW the fact that the sheep keeps on saying "R U ready 2 laugh" made it less funny and more annoying.

jee, what a lovely rip-off of Seinfeld...

...well, not really. The dialog is slower, the story is plotless, and it just simply wasn't humorous. Are YOU ready to be funnier?

Well...

I sure as hell was ready to laugh.

But then ... This dry flash bored me to death. That was very bland hummor, and the "Are you ready to laugh?" Didn't help... in fact it made it worse. Next time put some thought into your jokes, and get rid of that line.

The Animation? Flawless... but nothing can out-do a good laugh.

It just wasn't funny at all.

You obviously spent a long time on this with the visuals. It's a shame there's nothing to really back it up. There was just nothing that I think anyone could possibly consider funny. Shouldn't there have been a point during the hours and hours you spent on the 3D animations that you asked someone else what they thought of the script?
You certainly have potential. You could make a music video or something. Just get someone else to come up with the ideas.