Reviews for The Grey

[Kikiko]

not bad

Not bad at all. You should add some music though. Something really theatrical, drama and stuff. Janking guitars, choirs, you know.

This thing is mysterical. Whieeh!

disent responds:

Thanks for the tip, it does have some music though not much, thanks again.

[cfb]

Good

Yes, you've made an asrtsy little diddy, but it would have been nice to have the continuous music. It really does add to your little film.

disent responds:

Thanks for the tip, I'm new to this site & I don't touch flash much & thanks for the graphic & style score.

[In-Style-Always]

um... i have a question...

what kind of movie is this? its just some tree (it looks like one) growing. then it shoots green lazers.

disent responds:

I don't really know what it is either, like I said in my description it's rather meaningless, just a piece of 'art' I felt compelled to make, thanks for the graphics score & the question.

[EllR]

Neat

Im an arty person and i liked it and i think it has a lot of potentail if u ever get round to adding to it

disent responds:

Thanks for your comments, I may add to it one day & possibly add a little meaning to it all, thanks again.

[edenhead]

Ok so it's not a completed flash yet

but that's no reason in itself to blam it. Ignore the people who blammed this, you can't please everyone.

The animation quality was great and the music really suited the mood of the whole thing. I'm curious as to what it was.

I know i'm repeating some of what has been said before, but it could potentially be good if you can work it into a story or something. One peice of advice though, if you are going to use it in another flash project, make sure you've got a good story to tell, don't just force this flash into the middle of your future project or it'll stick out like a sore thumb. Being able to use flash well is only 40% of the battle, the other 60% is having a good story to tell. You've obviously got some skill, you don't need to rest your next project entirely around a 5 second clip. That'd be crazy.

Even if you don't use this bit of flash, I liked the style of it which I think you should carry over into your next project, whether you use this flash in it or not.

Good luck with your next project whatever it is.

disent responds:

Thanks for your comments & tips, muchly appreciated :)