i will always find something to bitch about.
first off.. man that was great! for a first flash .. (well just take a look yerself, ya dont see that very often)
i liked the manga style animation but i have to say.. just like manga nowadays nothing is really animated just the head or just a mouth.. or just some smoke. but the style and the artwork were really good and if you work on animating a little more than just making a bit of an elaborate slide show i think you will go far.