Okay
Since this is your first flash, I GUESS I won't be an ass about it. The movie was slow and it just wasn't worth sitting there for so long watching while hoping this guy pwnz the city but actually end up with a non-funny (IMO) ending.
cookie?
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whoopsie...
oops, the batteries died!!!
RAMON... WHY DID THIS GET A FRONT PAGE VIEW THINGY
i hope i'm not the only person out there that thought this was pretty awful... sure your design of the robot was ok.. but it was way too inspired by that one guy on DBZ... also your only other character didn't have any detail... i'm guessing that's because you can't draw faces very well, so it was all hidden in shadow... also the ending was terrible... you could have had the robot nuke the city... but no... you had to go for a cheezy ending that didn't fit with any of the prior set up... let me see him go into combat, wipe out armies and such... i don't think the doctor/scientist would have had the guy in there and then let him out with no charge in the batteries... your music was awful, tedious and boring... the film is too long... not enough action... every movement is way too long and doesn't need to be that way... it's like a 30 second process for the hand to go up into the arm and for the poorly animated nuke delivering devie to drop back out... this thing is hardly animated at all... it's alot of still shots... the robot moves his head once... the arm thing sorta moves, but you cheat it and don't really 'animate' it... this thing is way too long, and doesn't deliver a punch in the end
i wouldn't have put it on the front page... but whatever
*yawn*
Good graphics, and good ending, but it was excrushiatingly(sp?) slow moving. It wasn't very exciting and was actually a bit boring.
But again, good graphics!
Nice But Disappointing
You did excellent work with the appearance. You don't see too many flashes with work like that. Still, i think it would have been better to make an action flash out of it instead of creating all that drama and than ruining it with a cheap attempt at humor at the end. For all the time it took to get to the end, the film was rather anticlimatic. Still, the skill you have with artwork means you have serious potential, you might just want to stick with action. You probably shouldn't squander it on humor flicks 'cause with humor flashes you don't care as much about the artwork because your listening for the joke.