what happened to the first eighteen?
it was really slow. you could have cut in half and you wouln't have lost anything. the dead battery was kinda funny but by the time it happened i was already lost in a world of day dreaming. also if the target was earth, wouldnt he just step out of the pod and start shooting the ground. thats what i would do. (take that earth... bang, bang, bang.) but its a good first attempt.
Wow Ending
Umm... the ending was pretty crappy. At the beggining I thought it would be an awesome Flash Series. You just killed it at the end. You did a great job of making everyone all hyped up at the beggining with the good graphics and action but the ending just killed everything. Sry man.
You kinda killed it.
You killed the whole feel ofthe movie with the battery
empty thing. You also spelled destroying wrong (distroying) and source (soure) Other than that great job.
great job
good job, man. i think you did really well on your first "movie." however, here's the criticism. while humor is good, that ending shouldnt have been in there. the feeling of danger from that cool music playing and the threat of earth about to be destroyed was ruined by the little joke at the end. other than that i say it was a great flash. nice graphics too. i'm bigfloppe
A little too slow for me
That was extremly slow. You could have gotten just as good an effect if it were shorter. You might want to work on how body parts move a bit more, things were very stiff and akward. It was very nice graphics wise and i could tell you'd put alot of effort into it. Good job!