NICE!!!
I really liked this and i know wish i'd watched the dragonball series (ive only seen a few and before uni, im gonna take a year out and watch them all :-P) and the prequels to this. My only critism was the sound. I think this woud be greatly developed if you did voices for the characters and had music playing constantly. I had to check my speakers weren't broken at several points because of radom silences. Apart from that, really good! Wish i had that kind of animating talent.
Thanks for the review. The reason I use silence is because the original japanese dragonball series used a lot of silence.
I'm trying to emulate the original style and not the style of the english dub.
Once again thanks for the review! ^_^
Good yet........
You need to be a bit more original; your story seemed as though you just altered the names android saga and the ages of the crew. Sure Akira Toriyama's series were somewhat interesting, but one does not have to mimic them to a tee. Perhaps you should observe other anime artists and create your own style, you have potential but you have yet to use it.
goood but...
there should have been more fighting and krillin!!!! he could get as angry as he wants he would still get owned besides that it was all good.
Hmm?
Its seems to me all you did was download a whole bunch of dbz episodes. Imported them into flash, cut some pieces of the clips movie clipped it. And traced it only making the clothes and skin different, I could tell cause I remember seeing a lot of things during the movie. Like during the Kurirny fight. The fight seemed to be Cell Vs Gohan. And when kuriny won. You used the Saiyan saga. Where goku was laying on the ground beat up from Vegeta. If you're talanted at drawing why don't you make some things freestyle. Make up your own fights and i'll give you a 5. Although I still enjoyed it. 3/5.
Ugh, So many questions.
First of all I want to say, really really nice series so far.
Just a few things you should go over in your future episodes that I want to write about.
The first and most CRUCIAL thing that is needed in this series is better AUDIO, The stuff you use at the moment like the Japanese Dragonball Z Music and the Naruto stuff are really dull.. Try using some of the Original Music from "Bruce Faulconer", Then next time, I'll give your "Sound Score" more than a 2. *sigh* lol.
Secondly, Voice actors, See, I don't understand why you used Voice Acting in the first Episode, then the rest Subtitled. o.0
You really do need voice actors, Ask some of your friends, or post around in the forums. Then the series would be alot better. :)
Furthermore, What the heck is up with the Characters names?, Are you worried about Copyright or something? (Wtf), or are they like.. Son's and Daughters of Vegeta, Goku.. Etc.. etc..
Lastly, I noticed you used alot of scenes from the Cell saga in the Memory bit of Episode 6, And at one time you even used it from the Raditz Saga. o.0
Ugh.. All I have to say really now, Great job on the series so far, But try an improve on the stuff I've written above, then the series will rock. 8)
"Try using some of the Original Music from "Bruce Faulconer"
HAHAHA! Are you serious? You'll never hear Bruce Faulconer crap in SJ again.