Ok
If there's one thing I like, it's a giant squid.
In conclusion to that statement, I must say that that creature that was blocking the door way was amazing!
It's one big eye was perfect, the designs in it made it awesome. The tentacles latching around the door were awesome.
But most of all, the smile. The wide and evil smile filled with teeth. THAT, was amazing.
Anyways, the rest of it. The music seemed a bit too dramatic, just a bit though. Well, not really dramatic I guess, more Lord of the Rings-ish, if you know what I mean.
The creatures, once again, were cool. The action was good.
And once again, I need to say I don't really like the squat alien.
But the squid creature makes up for all I didn't like in it and more.
Awesome.
Oh, and I think you should still make it darker. And re-add subtitles.