first try
you can make it unblammable- it wasn't too bad. add some sound and maybe make it a bit longer. keep working with flash; if this was your first attempt, it's pretty good.
Reviews for "viking goes cold (+sound)"
sound
You need sound. At least some sound effects like the mountain shaking, or when feet touch the snow, you could add something there. Good movie though.
2/5
A little slow paced, but otherwise good. I think the figure is a little too "fat" than to be very accurate as well.
Milarky responds:
as its a class project im was restricted to 30 seconds, i hope on zooms and close ups, but to get in in on time im resorted to siloets, it deviated from the orginal storyboad quite a bit, the viking is ment to be comic fat and simple by design