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i like this. if you're 15, that's really impressive. try listening to some trance music on youtube or whatever. i reckon if you take influence from some of the best trance artists out there you can really strengthen the trance feel in your tracks. ferry corsten is one of my favourites so give 'ferry corsten - feel you' a listen :)
you definitely need some compression on your kick, but try to keep it punchy like a real trance kick. some better variations in your trancegates would be wicked too, if you can stereo pan your tg's that'd be spicey :)
and keep up the great tracks, i'm enjoying them ;)