I really like the style of this one..
This is a pretty cool flash. Worthy of a much higher rating than it
presently has. I like the black and white outline style quite a bit, and the girl's running sequence. It seems like its got potential.
The dream sequence is pretty interesting when he drops the girl.
Me I tend to like plot elements, and stories that don't follow
preset formulas. One of the biggest draws of newgrounds
for me, is the fact that since the animations are not for profit, the
possibility for new and unusual plots is virtually unlimited.
Don't let people discourage you! Keep up the good work, and
try your hardest to tell a good story.