Great
Is this really your first flash? It's amazing! I mean, the figures could use some bodies, and legs...The No-Armed thing is great, makes it easy for them to fight and so on... The music was pretty cool aslwell. I know what the second one's like, sence I saw it first lol.
Well it's not my first, it's the first one that got onto newgrounds though, my 2nd one is alot better, this one ended abruptly so without watching them both this one kind of sucks if you ask me.
nice
yes you can make some awsome things is this your first flash?Anyway you did a good job make some more
Yes this is my first flash (that got onto newgrounds) but it's really like my 4th that i made... 3rd one shoulda made it to NG i think but i'm not ogna lower my batting average...
And i made more go check those out and review them.
this is great!!!
one problem though:the guns were the wrong way round! they are ment to hold the short part... and work on explosions. other than that it was awesome!!!
:P yeah the guns did kinda suck, this was my first flash though, check out my new one, but i didn't have music looping on so even in low quality the music doesn't make it as far as it would have, i'm working on fixing it now, but yeah check out Rakeshian Pride if you liked this
Mmm you are having a nice beggining...
well... the problems were the graphics and effects... I've got an idea... look enter to an OekakiBBS: Register, draw something there (dedicate time in it) people will criticize your art and then try practicing with MSPaint, Photoshop and other programs. You can start a DeviantART account too! Ask people how to improvise and stuff.
Well... I'll give you an honest 3 because there are a lot o flashes with this quality, but because you're asking for some good critization, I'll let it survive :) Dedicate time to your work and it will prevail!
w00t, I shall consider your words in my next flash(s)
Good stuff
I enjoyed it. Areas of improvement to me would be smoother animation when the soldiers walk. It almost looked as if the feet were teleporting short distances. The guns need to be drawn more accurately (ie. handle is not longer than the gun barrel) unless they were uzis of course. It would have been nice if the dead bodies stayed instead of disappearing. Music selection was fine, but could be better.
Anyway good job, 4/5.
Enoy life... with a butter knife.
but butter knifes make my bleed :(
thanks for the tips