Could've been much better
I really like the style, the art is perfectly done, but you really need to work on pacing. It just moved like a snail, so it made the humor too infrequent to be very funny. Mine main gripe (and the reason I bothered writing a review) was that the sound was TERRIBLE. You should really work on that. I felt like the awful sound mixing ruined it. The voices were incredibley quite, then they would get even quiter... then ever quiter... I seriously thought something was wrong with my computer. I was checking my volume and my speakers and I finally decided to just crank them up. Then WAM! Very loud sound effects! Then quite voices. Then BLAST! Deafening sound effects! Then in audible voices again. It was quite frustrating. So in the end, I think you hsould keep at it... just try to tighten it up a bit and for love of God fix your volume levels!