Reviews for Ortus(part III)

[ramagi]

Nice

Ok it taken three parts to really get the flow of your style down. It is very different then a lot of the other stuff I have seen on the site.
I like the fact you added subtitles, you should include that feature in all these flash. I actually would recomend when you are doing the voice acting part you tone the sound of the background music down.
Even though this one was better at that then the last.
Tha graphics are nice, the story is getting compelling.
I'll have to make sure to watch out for more of these.

bica1 responds:

Thank you very much for your comments! I hope you enjoy the next parts that I will be making(after stray, because you have seen stray)!

[morefngdbs]

Interesting...

The style was different.
There is lots of room to move on the story (in future,if you care to)
The original drawing was nicely done.
Sound wasn't bad either.
all good points, could be better , but still a decent submission as far as I'm concerned.
thanks.

bica1 responds:

thank you!

[super-ghetto-fly]

I think it was good but is it a teaser

This is more like a teaser than an animation. I mean the animation could be a little cleaner and most of it were like clips of different positions. So the animation was very choppy but this was very good and powerful so keep up the good work.

bica1 responds:

thank you for your constructive criticism...for my next project, I will make sure to animate more.

Thank you.

[lazybum1]

i watched 1-3 now

1 was good, kinda declined from there. good story. good graphics, style i though was a little worse...

but sorry... on 2-3 you need to improve the sound >< or at least add a sub-titles option. that would increase my overall score by 3.
its just the sound quality really pulled me away from the flash

bica1 responds:

yeah, I fixed that, I have added subtitles, so people could at least understand more of what's going on.

[JorNcar]

ehhh

the graphics weren't great. plus it was anime....
the stlye wasn't amazing either. All I thought of it was a bunch of different pictures put one after another with some person faintly talking in the background. Half the time I couldnt hear/see what was going on, and most of the time the pictures looked rushed, and sloppy. you do have potential for a great movie, so keep trying.

bica1 responds:

Thanks for the constructive criticism. Hmmm...I can't figure the audi well, it makes me think about putting subtitles for future project. We'll see.....

Thank you for your input.