This was very good.
It was an extremely good piece. This is extremely close to outstanding. I enjoyed all the fight scenes, and the story was reasonable, but worked very well indeed. I got into the plot quickely, and it went into enough depth to push its marks up. Obviously, graphics were a weakness -they didn't reach the criteria of a 9 or 10. They were not terrible, but they need polishing up to add a sense of realism to the piece. On the other hand, the final scene was beautiful. If anything, try to sort out the text that is visible in the flash, to match. for instance on the gravestone, the text needs to be grainy and as it were carved into the stone.
The music worked outstandingly. You have reached the level that is outstanding with that. Most of the violence was realistic enough, perhaps the baby decapitation thing looked a bit poor, and same with the arm getting cut off - very cliche.
But, appart from that, this was one of the best flashes of its type I've seen. Just push it that little bit further to get Outstanding. Well done!