That was very cool!
I can't wait to see the next part! The only thing is that the guy just
all of a sudden is in a space ship and flying. Then the black guy is flying *SOMETHING*! (I can't figure out what it is.) BOOM! then the movies *to Be Continued*. to the point: i thought the ending wasnt very good. on terms of where to end it. but the parachuting part took way too long to get over with, i mean u dont have a guy up in the air for two hours on a parachute. Same thing with the rocket it took to long to get it going to the part where it gets hit.