Whoa
A 10 MB flash on NG, that's something new to me.
IN DEPTH REVIEW TIME
Graphics: Pretty good, some of it is kind of sketchy, but I understand that is part of the style. The FBF is also a little sketchy, but its good.
Style: Neat stuff, not a totally large amount of this kinda stuff on NG.
Sound: Some of the sound is really crackly, you should run it through Audacity or something.
Violence: Wow, ripped his eyes right out.
Interactivity: Quality control at the beginning of the movie is nice.
Humor: Well, I don't think you were aiming for humor, so it doesn't matter anyways.
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This is an interesting flash, and I do think that I will want to see the next one. The only problem with it however, is the filesize is much too large. I could see this being a 2 MB flash, it seems that you must have not done much for audio exportation. Streaming audio and running it through Audacity and the like would help the filesize drop alot, and exporting the movie with audio stream/event at a lower KB/S would probably help, or maybe it just has to be like that, I am not too sure.
Great job, I bet this will be received well among the NG audience, and I will be waiting to see the next part of this series to see where this is leading to.
Good job.
4/5.