Sound is the problem
I've got no criticisms for the plot or dialogue except that the "that's what makes it so . . . special!" line was predictable. Maybe it could be "that's what makes it so . . . fishsticks!" for that random touch. The graphics were nice, especially of Headshot - that little man is freakin' crazy. The sound was the lowest point of the flash; some dialogue was barely audible, and while other parts - frequently Alex's parts - were way too loud. And very, VERY sweet credits - they had class, which most credits on Newgrounds do not.
Good job on the flash!