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Reviews for "Soldier Episode 1"

okay........

it was okay i have seen better but i do hope you make a second one :l

Ehhh...

With a little practice, I think it could become a great series. But I would definately suggest Photoshop or a similar program for animation.

explosions

those are some cheap ass explosions dude, but i kinda like the sound

It's alright

I love this Zoom sight on his Mahcine Pistol - I don't imagine now is a good time to mention that it's typically a short range weapon, no I didn't think so, so I won't mention it....

Animation wise, I'm not a fan of stick figures - a very small number are animated well, but the vast majority (like this) makes it look more like you were too lazy to draw even a cartoon character.

On top of that you need to work on your explosion animations, and if you're going to have an extreme close up of a rifle barrel - you might as well take the effort to animate a muzzle flash - especially considering you can't see the rifle round leaving the barrel.

Not too bad, but consider spending a little extra time to tidy it up and not settle for "oh that's good enough for now" - Even if your not a good artist - your work will benefit from spending more time on it.

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1. That wasn't very good.
2. That wasn't too original
3. There are probably a lot of people out there who think they are the only ones with the name stick corporation.