monkeys rule
Dude this cartoon was awesome. Monkeys in space should be a real cartoon on T.V. Keep doing that thing that you do.
monkeys rule
Dude this cartoon was awesome. Monkeys in space should be a real cartoon on T.V. Keep doing that thing that you do.
it was good
One thing bugged me this whole flash clip. You didnt color the teeth and mouth. Maybe thats what you werre going for or not but it bugged the shit out of me
LOL
What are you on? I don't know how you did it but I let it play all the way to the end and enjoyed it too!
Best credits ever.
I thought the cartoon could have been better. It really was kinda boring to watch. The dialogue was reasonably funny, though I think if you had sped it up a little and not had so much down time, it could have been better. Also, the characters could have a little bit more motion than just waving their arms around. Character movement can really make or break an animation, not matter how funny the script. If you had the most brillient comedic writing ever concieved by mankind, but made a cartoon whose only movement was lip syncing, it really would be horrible.
However, your credits I found to be absolutely hilarious. Which actually as an animator I would think would be frustrating (you spent a great deal more time on the animation then you did on the credits, I'm sure, and yet somehow they turned out to be funnier...).
Anyways, keep improving your animation and drawings. You're a pretty good writer, but you just don't have the skills to convey what you write yet.
Good animations but
The animations were good, but your voice acting leaves a little something to be desired...and since there's no actual like, acting in this, it's all about the VOICE acting. When that isn't there...it ruins things. A lot of the jokes were delivered poorly which kind of ruined things for me. I dunno it just...struck me as something a couple of 15 or 16 year olds, sitting in their basement with a tape recorder, decided to do. Maybe it's just me? But that was the only part I didn't like. And prostitute the monkey is great.
And I LOVED chocolate with medical drugs inside when I was a kid, it made me the man I am today!
You too? And I thought I was the only one who injected Prozac into my candy bars...